我的打击报复，：）

Overall，great work！

1. who strive to be good readers，strive没有表达出设法做而且成功的概念。

2. The people who love to read--> Those who love to read

3. With a book in the hand， 我觉得有点怪

4. Without any conscious effort,-->efforts?

5. their imagination, which will greatly benefit them in future.

which clause 跟在imagination后面,指imagination的话不太对。