几处语法错误

来源: 胡华泠 2016-12-24 13:05:37 [] [博客] [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读: 次 (239 bytes)
回答: Let's fall into it御宅的风儿2016-12-04 04:50:22

You seem, not you seems

As light, not as a light

too much noise, not too much noises

Too tight, not too tightly

挺好的诗,改了错就不一样了

 

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