Agree with Bill's comments. One more thing to note:
the "s" in therapies, and copious quantities, memories should be more of a voiced sounds, z.
Great reading! I tried reading it myself, couldn't read it so fluently. Enjoyed listening to yours!
the "s" in therapies, and copious quantities, memories should be more of a voiced sounds, z.
Great reading! I tried reading it myself, couldn't read it so fluently. Enjoyed listening to yours!