我聽到
四月握着一條站着一隻鈴鐺狀小鳥的樹枝
把春天搖響
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I heard
April filled Spring with sounds
by shaking a branch with a little bell-shaped bird on it
我聽到
四月握着一條站着一隻鈴鐺狀小鳥的樹枝
把春天搖響
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I heard
April filled Spring with sounds
by shaking a branch with a little bell-shaped bird on it
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