我试了一下第二首

不太满意。下面一长一短两个版本是我儿子的尝试，他上中文课学过第二首。

（一）

Somnolent feelings on this Spring early morning

without my knowing, the dawn is coming

I hear the entrancing song of birds

Reverberating through the skies, from nearby and from afar, 

And from outside I heard 

the sounds of howling winds and rains last night, 

and still I lie in sleep, 

wondering how many flowers are lying 

on the ground beneath the tree this morning

 

（二）

 

Still asleep, in Spring, the dawns come without my knowing

The song of birds from near and afar is echoing

Sounds of howling winds and cutting rains I heard last night

Still in bed, though it’s long turned bright,

Wondering how many petals lay beneath the old tree this morning.

所有跟帖： 

• 学到了这个字Somnolent，以前只知道 sleepy, drowsy -康赛欧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2022 postreply 17:29:38

• 呵呵 我也是今天新学的这个词，第一版我是画了个葫芦 让我儿子改得面目全非了 ：） -cxyz- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2022 postreply 19:16:10

• 我按你说的，把翻译李白的诗打了几个回车，立马大白话象诗了，LOL -康赛欧- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/21/2022 postreply 20:59:05

• ：D -cxyz- ♀ (0 bytes) () 03/22/2022 postreply 04:27:29