七律 读 出门

七律 读 出门

遥忆当初没命追
九泉夸父泪双垂
如今隔海离情苦
往日由天割爱悲
百世因缘还未了
千秋果报尚需为
心驰大野生诗雨
越过重洋洗脑宜

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• 谢谢诗友雅和，高兴拙作能给你带来灵感。最后一句作何解？ -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 15:59:52

• My special pleasure. I guess u lived in PRC for about 30 -吴之一- ♂ (129 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 16:29:13

• Keeping one's heritage doesn't mean she is brain-washed, -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:08:10

• just like I won't assume you were brain-washed. -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:09:24

• One can only be brain-washed when she is still young and -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:11:21

• brain still has open channels for washing fluid to come out -godog- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/27/2023 postreply 17:13:03

• Well argued . I'm just kidding -吴之一- ♂ (0 bytes) () 11/28/2023 postreply 04:12:37