Fantasy

Fantasy
What am I walking on, sand or salt?
Does it matter?
Yes, salt lives in the sea
And sand lives by the sea
I prefer to walk on salt-
Tingling my feet
Rather than melting on my tongue

 
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Jenny Middleton - Lovely merging of elements in this poem.23 hours ago

Line Gauthier - Fun poem. Nice to create light poetry in these times of much
concern.9 days ago

- I really appreciate your wonderful comments! Pray for its end.9
days ago

Line Gauthier - Absolutely.

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• 兄好，安否？ -胡华泠- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2020 postreply 09:07:01

• 谢谢 问好 保重 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2020 postreply 09:29:06

• "I prefer to walk on salt- Tingling my feet Rather than melting -秦照- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/13/2020 postreply 13:10:38

• 谢谢司令 问好 -颤音- ♂ (0 bytes) () 04/14/2020 postreply 09:30:03