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大展鴻圖詩賀日強 (鶴頂格) (七律)

 

                                         大展鴻圖詩賀日強

                                                   (鶴頂格) (七律)

   

                                          大成事業賽朱陶

                                          展腳施拳指甲刀

                                          鴻爪南鄉功績少

                                          圖心北國著痕豪

                                          詩詞詠作情騷遠

                                          賀賦吟酬興雅高

                                          日夕辛勤花結果

                                          強書潑墨彩紅桃

 

                                         (註) 朱陶 : 意指陶朱公.

 

                                   二零一一年六月廿二日於一笑齋


 

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• 七律，题目八个字藏头又与诗内容紧密连接，很难写！ -小贝壳weed- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/20/2017 postreply 04:43:52

• 赞! -Meander001- ♂ (0 bytes) () 10/20/2017 postreply 05:11:41

• 问好M诗兄！代老乡前辈谢过M诗兄的点赞。 -小贝壳weed- ♂ (75 bytes) () 10/20/2017 postreply 05:16:51