Whoso List to Hunt 任谁想狩猎 试译

Whoso List to Hunt
Sir Thomas Wyatt

任谁想狩猎

文/ 托马斯 · 怀特

译/ Yimusanfendi  
Jan 7, 2017 译

任谁想狩猎

文/ 托马斯 · 怀特

译/ Yimusanfendi  
Jan 7, 2017 译

任谁想狩猎，我知哪儿有只母鹿

但对我，啊哈，我再也不去费力。
徒劳的努力已让我如此酸楚倦疲，
他们中我走得最远但仍落在后处。

但是我决不，不让我疲惫的思绪
从那母鹿抽脱，但当她向前逃避
我跟得眩晕。因此我放任她走离，
因我寻求在一张网里将那风捕住。

不管谁是猎她的人，我毫不怀疑
都将像我一样，将时间白白耗去。
绕她美丽的颈项，用明白的言语
且用钻石将这句话，刻写在那里：

“不要碰我，因为我是凯撒的财物，

被猎获时我很狂野，虽然看似驯服。”

Sir Thomas Wyatt

Whoso list to hunt, I know where is an hind,

But as for me, alas, I may no more.

The vain travail hath wearied me so sore,

I am of them that farthest cometh behind.

Yet may I by no means my wearied mind

Draw from the deer, but as she fleeth afore

Fainting I follow. I leave off therefore,

Since in a net I seek to hold the wind.

Who list her hunt, I put him out of doubt,

As well as I may spend his time in vain.

And graven with diamonds in letters plain

There is written, her fair neck round about: “

Noli me tangere, for Caesar’s I am,

And wild for to hold, though I seem tame.”

 

 

 

Whoso list: whoever wants Hind:

Female deer Noli me tangere: “Don’t touch me”

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