这首英文诗。作者英文很好。
但是他的英文好,是指写文章方面。不是写诗方面。
写诗的语言,不讲究语法结构的完整,有的时候甚至是讲究不完整的。
这首的句子结构太完整了。比如下面黄色标出来的几句。
有些词其实可以省。
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Back at one
When the old song began to sing
I knew the moment was coming
Rain drops tapped and danced
Your three words were a maze into which I vanished
Your three words were a maze into which I vanished
I never dreamed the dream came true
I never prayed this prayer of giving
But the rain hazed into a hail
Sorry my darling
Sometimes even the sky couldn’t help crying
A rainbow gave away the hiding sun
Now the storm quieted and clouds were gone
Should I
Should I still
Turn it back to one
I had your words and now you have mine
I’ll cherish and I’ll embrace
Shall we
Shall we still
Go back at one