我觉得另一个毛病是tell太多
所有跟帖:
• Show, not tell! Don't tell me it is raining, show me the moonlig -FionaRawson- ♀ (80 bytes) () 12/15/2021 postreply 18:15:47
• 所言极是。 -LinMu- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/16/2021 postreply 00:54:09
• Show, not tell! Don't tell me it is raining, show me the moonlig -FionaRawson- ♀ (80 bytes) () 12/15/2021 postreply 18:15:47
• 所言极是。 -LinMu- ♂ (0 bytes) () 12/16/2021 postreply 00:54:09