Very good translation. One thing to discuss--
道是不能翻译的。 如果简单的REPHRASING能解释道, 道即不为道。 玄也是不可翻译的。 将玄翻译成mistery, 玄已不是玄。 所以。 我认为给出音译为好。 让读者自己体会什么是玄。
抛砖引玉:
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They are both called Xuan.
Pursuing the intimation of the Xuan holds the key to the gate to all the secrets.
抛砖引玉:
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They are both called Xuan.
Pursuing the intimation of the Xuan holds the key to the gate to all the secrets.