建议楼主静下心来-revise the blog

来源: 于 2017-04-12 07:13:31 [旧帖] [给我悄悄话] 本文已被阅读：次

写作需要一颗安静的心，希望你能花点时间提高英文写作。

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For me, style should expresses your personality as well as inner essence rather than being “IN”!

楼主看出最基础的语法错了吗？:)