A great piece: well-written, an easy-read
Precise punctuation and natural transition helped make this relatively lengthy piece flow well, and therefore, easy to read and follow.
One exception: The quotation marks were misplaced in the sentence below?
他又一次让我惊叹:“三百多页的附件!”
And, one small suggestion: Adding a strategically placed blank line here and there may help further improve readability.
One exception: The quotation marks were misplaced in the sentence below?
他又一次让我惊叹:“三百多页的附件!”
And, one small suggestion: Adding a strategically placed blank line here and there may help further improve readability.