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I was told on (date) that I am promoted to (职位）with increased salary to (工资）。 I belive (你有多好，聘了你对他们有多大好处）and prefer to work for (新公司).  I'd like to know if you can match XYZ.

现在是真刀真枪提要求的时候了，“My promotion in current company is in progress!” 这种话是我的专利。

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• 谢谢，很有价值的建议 -圆老扁- ♂ (296 bytes) () 07/12/2018 postreply 09:42:06

• 关键不是你多么好，而是聘了你对他们有多少好处。 -废话多多- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/12/2018 postreply 13:07:30