thank you! would you mind pointing those errors to me?

To my side, I definitely want to improve. 

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• 你中文就写的很差，不少地方读着很别扭，而且产生歧义，也有很多语法错误。 -tiantiantaba- ♀ (118 bytes) () 09/06/2015 postreply 22:41:33

• " 这个分数在单位就是人力资源部可以把我扫地出门的“ -丹皮- ♀ (187 bytes) () 09/06/2015 postreply 23:05:07

• "To my side, I definitely want to improve." what do you mean her -LittleHer- ♀ (70 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 08:16:36

• what do you mean here by "to my side"? -LittleHer- ♀ (0 bytes) () 09/07/2015 postreply 08:26:15