我一般会写

纯粹表达感谢，thanks for taking your time。发的时间稍微注意一下，比如周四周五面试我，并许诺下周为我安排点什么，我就周日发个thanks note过去，顺便提醒对方一下下：hi，可以为我开动干活了????

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• 那么不是今天早上面试，而现在马上写感谢信，而是稍微等两天再写？ -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 12:47:37

• 我会回家当晚就写。 -一挪- ♀ (389 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 12:53:02

• 请帮忙看看，这么简单地写可以吗？ -问讯- ♀ (406 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 12:57:55

• Pretty much. but I am not sure about the "nervous" part. I would -一挪- ♀ (75 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 13:10:06

• i meant i would not include that "nervous" part. :) -一挪- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 13:10:38

• I see, thanks. How about the design document? I feel it's too ea -问讯- ♀ (70 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 13:12:34

• simplified: -问讯- ♀ (305 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 13:22:46

• You can't tell the person what to do. Try this one: -废话多多- ♀ (821 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 13:46:39

• Thanks, this is much better, but I sent the simplified version a -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 14:13:50

• 不好意思的说一句，你的version用词太硬了，我若收到这样的email不会喜欢。 -arcsigh- ♀ (48 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:12:18

• 没办法，已经寄出去了，听天由命吧。 -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:14:52

• 看来真是不写还好些。。。 -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:18:48

• 呵呵，没事啦。对方理解的。你真付合他们的标准他们也不会因为一封email而改变主意。 -arcsigh- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:25:40

• 好吧，谢谢。 -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:32:59

• 而且不应该用chance而应用opportunity 一词。 -arcsigh- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:16:47

• 对，太不专业了，噢！ -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 19:17:39

• 废话的这个版本看起来顺眼些。 -livinghere- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 21:25:18

• so, just remove the nervious part, and maybe mention the design -问讯- ♀ (0 bytes) () 07/31/2014 postreply 13:11:22

• You mean e-mail, instead of letter, right? -朱珠儿- ♀ (332 bytes) () 08/01/2014 postreply 12:55:31