The world in a puddle A puddle tiny and shiny in the sun in the middle of a muddy trail
A puddle passed by hikers who rush towards the snow-covered summit countless steps countless splashes A puddle halts an exhausted hiker He kneels, bends, and stares at the puddle He sees young meadow aged forest graphite mount and its snow-white peak shining in the blue sky inspiration © 17 hours ago
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Likes: Sand Singer, Simon Hosken, S. SharpeTo reply, click a comment. Simon Hosken - Not only is this first rate - but the sort of poem I would like to have written - my only qualm (forgive!) is that 1 or 2 of the lines are unnecessary or that the poem could have been a little tighter - but without doubt - what can I say 11 hours ago S. Sharpe - nice both on attentiveness and reflection of the beauty in anything and everything 13 hours ago |