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    #跟帖#  的确原稿中最后两联都蕴含故里这主题,改后去掉了。槛外是栏杆外,改后第三联不仅形式更工整,诗意也更连贯,前句屋外,后句屋里 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  前三联意思没变,尾联意思全改了,但更扣东风这个题,而且尾联的两句呼应更明确,原来的隐晦,也不直接扣题 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  多谢吴兄雅和 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  厚重的诗文 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  我携一抹晓霞辉,洒脱,酷 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  侯兄这也是巧妙集句吧 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  风月小无涯,怎解? [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  惜也老师也用搬砖、空巢这样的新词入诗,学习了。春节快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    【七律】东风 (依惜也老师评论修改) [诗词欣赏] - godog(1119 bytes ) 2024-02-12
    #跟帖#  给侯兄拜年!龙年大吉! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  四首并赏。给yongshi兄拜年了! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  情真意切!方外兄新春快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  给您拜年,祝龙年吉祥! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  苏兄春节快乐!龙年大吉! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  词美曲美! 春节快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  小李兄新春快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-11
    #跟帖#  龙年大吉!笔健诗丰! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  祝先生新春快乐!寿比南山! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  春节快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  新春快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  祝诗友们新春快乐!龙年大吉!佳作迭出! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    【七律】除夕梦回 [诗词欣赏] - godog(377 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  祝梅林老师新春快乐!龙年大吉! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  祝惜也老师新春快乐!龙年大吉! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  谢谢惜也老师精评!非常受益!要是今后有空能常给予拙作这样的点评就太好了 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-10
    #跟帖#  祝教授新春快乐!龙年吉祥!佳作迭出! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-09
    #跟帖#  清白人知清白色,一枝横绝月明溪。首首皆美! Lilly春节快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-09
    #跟帖#  春节快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-09
    #跟帖#  今宵爆竹燃千户, 唤得春风醒睡龙。春节快乐! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-09
    #跟帖#  春节快乐!龙年大吉!云峰星岭路曲长,长风万里回家乡 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-09
    #跟帖#  勉强完成了作业,真烧脑。祝大家春节快乐!新年吉祥如意!晚了,明天再来拜读大家的佳作。 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    【七绝】东西南北(交遍野作业)-- 写东不言东 [诗词欣赏] - godog(1498 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  惹了最不该惹的:) [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  我也得闭关去了。咱们是不是被教授给骗进了个大坑? [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  教授太厉害了,不是说忙吗,忙里偷闲就这么快地写了四首,脑子太好使了,不得不服 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  另外,只能接一单,因为跟不上教授的节奏,否则这作业可能要写到猴年马月了:) [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  是啊,原来罚单也可以讲条件:) [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  好的,教授写吧。说实话,有了这第三条我才敢接单的,it's open ended, haha [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  是不是应该规定再往下接的都必须是通吃呢?:) [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  我忽然发现自己缺乏罚人的权威 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  Lilly再加个东字也可以通吃,比如,花雨东来遍野红 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  谢谢yongshi兄辛苦编辑,诗友们诗兴勃发,精彩纷呈 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  哈哈,都不罚了,共襄盛举,才能盛况空前。盛世盛事写盛诗,东南西北可通吃。 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-08
    #跟帖#  哈哈,小李还是去探花吧 [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-07
    #跟帖#  人生得意诗梅雪,心事浮沉秋叶风。小蛮是传说中的野蛮女友吗?改性子了:) [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-07
    #跟帖#  孙猴子变的小李子在诈你呢,哪有什么破绽:) [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-07
    #跟帖#  趣意盎然! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-07
    #跟帖#  且驾长风追日月,当嘲大禹作河工。气冲霄汉! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-07
    #跟帖#  游子有家归未得,新丰孤旅恨无穷。xiaolee兄好律! [诗词欣赏] - godog(0 bytes ) 2024-02-07
    中国制造 [诗词欣赏] - godog(3222 bytes ) 2024-02-07
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