You have a good attitude. But many of your themes are questionable, as far as I can see.
For example,
"由于没有真正的由于没有真正的司法独立、舆论监督和民意制约,中国政府的权力是滋生腐败的最佳温床,中国政府的权力是滋生腐败的最佳温床"
Is there a causul relationship between the two? India (and many other countries) have everything but is still more, much more, corrupted than China.
A month ago WSJ has an article by a prof from Harvard on the rise of Asia including China, which I recommend to everyone here
In China's Orbit