回复：《灌水小品》一篇小学生游记

其实你女儿写的是首诗，看看这么排版是否更好？

MY VACATION

I have been to a lot of places.
I have been to Yellow Stone National Park.
My mom and I picked up some rocks.
We have also been to Corpus Cristi.

I did a lot of things.
I went camping and I went swimming.
I rode in a boat and I saw dolphins.
I went to DISNEY WORLD in Florida.
I went to three kinds of DISNEY WORLD.

First I went to magic kingdom then I went to Epcot，
and last I went to animal kingdom.
At Epcot there is thirteen kind of country.
They are Mexico, Japan, China, Norway and more.
I don’t want to talk about it right now
My favorite country is Norway.
My brother’s favorite thing is the earth thing.


Animal kingdom wasn’t that fun.
I saw lions sleeping and I saw giraffes, crocodiles and elephant.
They were cool.
I have seen dolphins, manatees, and big tuna. I think it’s called that.
I have also seen rays, clown fish, jelly fish.
If you seen FINDING NEMO, then you’ll know what I’m talking about.
I have seen a fish that look like Gill.
I also seen a fish that look like Dory, the fish that has short term memory loss.


I have been to Colorado.
The view was so beautiful.
My dad has been to Washington D.C.. He met the President.
I wish I can go there too.

Every year my dad starts a vacation，
that’s why I call it MY VACATION.
Now, this coming Spring Break, I’m going to Big Bend.

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• 哈哈，谢谢，我会保存着你的帖子给我女儿看。 -DeepCreek- ♂ (0 bytes) () 07/27/2006 postreply 18:38:02

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