诗/歌难译，要兼顾合音律传神韵。
要是仅为了给老外解释，你这个就行了。
改几处：
rised 应是 risen 之误；
yet 应用在完成时 ( Why she hasn't come yet?)
As long as brother, I am patient in waiting,
My sweetheart will be running to here.
这段是女答男吧？应该是：
Your patient waiting, my dear brother,
Will eventually bring me to you side.
(or somethiong to this effect)
汗颜 :o(
要是仅为了给老外解释，你这个就行了。
改几处：
rised 应是 risen 之误；
yet 应用在完成时 ( Why she hasn't come yet?)
As long as brother, I am patient in waiting,
My sweetheart will be running to here.
这段是女答男吧？应该是：
Your patient waiting, my dear brother,
Will eventually bring me to you side.
(or somethiong to this effect)
汗颜 :o(
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